Gonna fail NanoWriMo
Gonna fail real bad


It's Me, MargeretDear Mister,It's Me, Margeret
I enjoy our occasional chats Really But stop spilling the wine It stains the carpet and gets everyone drunk
Sincerely,
The Blind Folk


MirrorYou're all different Everyday NewMirror
No Your eyes They change
All the others
Are the same But you I mean, you people
Illusions are the self
We are the self
Look past us
I can't
There is no past
Look harder Fix it
How
You know
It's hard
Get help
No
Then we'll always be here For you
For me


TelephoneOutside the window they'd beTelephone
Rows and rows
(and rows) of poles...with wires And I would speak in one end
Then you'd speak and It was beautiful
They'd troop across the green fields The sun would shine And our whispers would buzz past the winds
Giggles whistling down cables and
It was beautiful
But there was a number change
We just had to go to the big office Department of whatever they call it That day it rained
There was a lady Who smiled sweet Asked for our business We told her, she chuckled
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Your writing is very descriptive and succinct. Nice work.
And you're an incredible artist (who actually seems to care about their watchers-- which is amazing in itself), you deserve to have a much larger fanbase!
Try advertising yourself a bit!
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Good authors too who once knew better words, now only use four letter words writing prose, Anything Goes.
I'll be 100% involved in dA once I finish school this December. For now I have to hold back and wait until the time arrives.
No need to be embarrassed about your writing, just keep stepping out and share it. I'm glad to find that your descriptions are short and vivid; it's a rare thing in a young writer, so be proud.
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Good authors too who once knew better words, now only use four letter words writing prose, Anything Goes.
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Hey, dog entity! Rise up and bare your biscuit filthy fangs at the oppressive leash wielding demon!! G**damn my navel itches!!
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What may this mean, that thou, dead corpse, again, in complete steel revisit'st thus the glimpses of the moon?
Hamlet - Act I
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I would tempt you to click here to eat your brain but sadly I have consumed over 1000 brains and there is no room in my Zombie stomach for yours. [link]
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Squirrels will rule the world. Just you wait and see...
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