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Life's Address To You by ~hiopear123:iconhiopear123:



[She takes the pills
He's a walrus
What do I have?]

Lookie there
Another door
Go ahead
Don't you feel warm
The knob is too
So comforting
But listen to the fireman

You turned it
How stupid
You're silly
Look how my hand flops
When I shoo you away
Unworthy
For being in this room

Why can't you understand subtle clues?
Did you not feel
Did you not know
Hell was here
Welcome
Make yourself at home
Fat boy
Eat some cake
There's plenty

Go ahead
Open more doors
Look at yourself
Covered in burns
Barely alive
But you're addicted
Because I say you are
Take chances
Idiot
Fool
Dirty
I love you
Go make me proud
Go innovate
Inside the box
Go do what you're told
But excel
Find the outside
On the inside
Do everything
Not to put the gun you can't get
To your head

So go ahead
You might come out alive
Go
Do it
Make me laugh
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:iconfroggyy449:
i love how you discussed all the conflicting messages, specially the in the box one. how true and sad. gut poem!

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...or else you shall face the wrath of Kerrigora!
:iconhiopear123:
:> thank ya kindly

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Good authors too who once knew better words, now only use four letter words writing prose, Anything Goes.
:iconephend:
really cool idea

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Musical Angels fill the air so listen to them sing for you!
:iconhiopear123:
: D thank you, for the fave too!

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Good authors too who once knew better words, now only use four letter words writing prose, Anything Goes.
:iconephend:
anytime"

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Musical Angels fill the air so listen to them sing for you!

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